Awww, SO cute! My heart can barely take it! The look in my Queen's eyes and the blushes are precious! The most beautiful and adorable being ^^. I'd die of happiness if I was offered such a cute card from my Queen.
"I... Does it mean... that you w-won't give me any...? *tear in her eye*"
You look at her with sad eyes and advance toward her to cuddle her. You say: "No. It doesn't mean that. Just... that you should cherish love... and not only eat it."
"I.... I.... *tears in her eyes* *return the hug, crying* T-thank you... I-I didn't ate for days... Nobody wanted to be even close to me..."
-There, there... You should be loved too and... Are you.... Seriously? Are you eating all the love while I'm hugging you?
-*pushes her away* I-I... Unbelievable... Even after what I told you... and... this hug? You betray me and eat my love?!?"
"But.... but I'm starving!!! I was close to dying..."
-*Walk aways* I can't believe this...
"Please.... please.... don't go away... Please! *tears in eyes* PLEASE!!!!!
-No! I won't let myself trapped again by you!
"I.. I... I DON'T WANT YOU TO GO AWAY!!!!!! You're the only one who ever hug me in... years...."
-Ask yourself w- What? *stops trotting/walking*
"Please.... Give me another chance.... *she gallop to you and embrace you* G-give another chance....."
-N-no. Let me... *to your surprise, nothing happens. No love is being eaten, while she holds you, her hooves around your neck. Her eyes shot and tears running down her cheecks* I.... *you return the hug by holding her close to you and still no love being eaten*
"I... I forgot how great... a hug can be....."
-How... how can this be possible...?
"Very few... know us well and know we can control it... But... you were right....."
"I didn't cherish love enough... Maybe this... this is a first step for me for changing this...."
-*bring her in front of you at hovves lenght, warm smile on you lips* Probably for the best. For you and....
"I know. But... my changelings...."
-You're their queen. I'm sure you'll find something not involving envading another territory.
"Be my king!
"That way, I wouldn't need to feed to others' love... because.... *blushing* I'd be loving one... *blushing more* who's loving me in return..."
-*You look at her that way, so adorable with her blush and you answer* I'm sorry. I can't... *Her smile was gone and her eyes becoming sad again* You need to find someone who really loves you.
"You... you don't?"
-I like you. Yes. But... I'm going to get married in a couple of weeks. To the mare of my dreams... *her head hung down, begining to cry* Please! Don't cry....
"That.. that mare is very lucky to have you... as a mate..."
-Not really lucky. We love each other and that love is what make us happy together.
"You reminds me a certain couple... *sigh* I felt that feeling of a stallion have toward his loving one...."
-Yeah. I remember the wedding invasion. Well, it's time you find someone who will give you this love for what and who you are. Stay yourself..... err... except the love eating thing.... and I'm sure you won't be alone in a short time.
"Do... do you really think so?"
-Yeah. *You smile with a sincere smile* *She suddenly get closer to you and get you in an embrace, before suddenly take your head between her holed hooves and give you a warm kiss on your lips*
"T-thank you. Thank you for your help. *warm smile on her face* And your kindness. I'm sure you both will be happy together. She is lucky to have you. *trots away*
-W-where are you going?
"I have business to take care. And it is still Heart and Hooves day, so we'll benifit from it for some good healthy meals. Don't worry... we won't be too glutton and keep them enough for them, *wink*
-Uh... well.. take care then... and good luck.... *You swipe your mouth with your hoof, the taste of her lips still present on your. You look her going away, a smile on her face and you wonder* Did... did she made this on purpose? For seducing me? Or really for thanking me? *You stay there for a moment, puzzled by this single event who's mixing your judgement, trying to remember if you liked the kiss or not. You try to remember the kisses of your promised one, comparing them to this single one from the queen and ask yourself* Did she used the magic she used on Shining Armor? No. I still love my marefriend more. But... *you shake your head trying to clear your mind* I guess she won't have a hard time to find a good mate.
Yeah. I wasn't expecting to write something this long. But... hey! Even less for this kind of story. I hope you enjoyed reading it. Art wise: you did a wonderful and adorable work. Sorry if I made mistakes.
If you mean reading stories based on fanon material and/or fans fantasies (clean or not), I know what you mean.
But there are some very well written ones. It's a fun read as long as you remember it is not canon. I prefer canon material myself, but I based myself on your drawing for the story. I know that the "real" Chrysalis is far to be like this. I read the comic. But I guess we want her to come back in the show and get reformed as it happened to Discord. She is an interesting villain after all.
I checked and unfortunately Fimfiction doesn't accept the scriptic kind of stories. I woud need to edit the entire story so it would not look as a script. It doesn't mean I won't post it there, but not for now. Still, it is something good to know and I'll probably work on the next ones in a more standard format.
Awww it's so adorable, great job the heart holes add a nice touch. Only thing that would have made it for me was maybe an anatomically correct heart with heart shaped holes in it.But then again that's just preference and nitpicking still really well done.